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The single-best place to find the single-best headlines in addition to feel-good PR stories is the bottom feature story on the front page of the Wall Street Journal.
Within these pieces are sensational and zany stories about topics you can’t imagine. Today’s story is one of the best feel-good features I’ve seen there in awhile as it melds the rough and tough U.S. Marine Corps with the desert tortoise.
Yes, our nation’s military dual as conservationists. Hard to believe, eh?
The Story
On a training exercise in the deserts of California, in Twentynine Palms to be exact, the troops were charging a hill and shooting at targets until one of the softer-hearted screamed “tortoise alert!” (Those last four words are speculation.)
The exercise ceased and the turtle doctor was called to the scene; he’s part of “a little-known army of biologists and other scientists who manage the Mojave desert tortoise and about 420 other threatened and endangered species on about 28 million acres of federally managed military land.”
When the tortoises are scared, they pee themselves. I’m only telling you that so I can use this word I’ve never seen from the story…”an unplanned micturition can cause dehydration and even death.” (The best explanation for that is the turtle wets the bed, and BTW? My spell check did not like that word.)
So, the biologist shows the Marines how to soak the reptiles in water until they drink enough to carry on. Apparently, these desert dwellers don’t need a drink for about two years, and when they dribble from fear, their supply of water is exhausted.
Elements of a Good PR Story
Let’s look at why this story works for national news:
- Endangered species protected on federal reserves
- A team of biologists functioning within the military under a bit of secret cover
- The Marine Corps doing drills in the Mojave desert
- The Marine Corp as conservationists; ceasing all ops until the tortoise families are safely moved to distances away from training sites.
- Background about the reptile and its habits (the water factoids)
And, that really good headline tops it off, “The Few, the Proud, the Tortoises: Marines Protect Endangered Species; An Army of Biologists Are on Nature Patrol at Military Bases; ‘Walking Ravioli’
Your Good PR Story
Considering trying for national news with a good media relations professional? Here are some elements you can’t be without:
- Hard news with a soft news twist
- Current events angle; news that ties in with world affairs
- Data: could be new research, patterns of behavior
- Third-party Spokesperson: academic, scientist or other expert to vouch for the data
- Consumer: Person who receives the service, uses the product with a good story
- Company executive: Someone with the Message Map in hand who can present the company in proper light
The final item on your list is to have a professional pitch this to national media. It will be a huge challenge if you try to do it yourself.
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Hard news with a soft twist? What are we talking about, pretzels? 😉
Nice breakdown here, I like how you put it together. It is easy to understand the details. I might have to borrow some of this for my own use.
Joshua Wilner/A Writer Writes Ah-hah! You caught that! So glad you were paying attention. I wonder if I should really share what that means or let more engaged readers ask.
Let’s see if anyone else pops in to inquire and then I’ll let the secret out…!
Sure, use my stuff and then I’ll come find you. In the interim…v appreciate the drive by!
Jayme, I’m so glad you wrote about that story! I don’t read the Wall Street Journal and as a Canadian, I have only a passing acquaintance with the U.S. Marines (most of which involves John Wayne). What a great story!!! And most importantly, I will sleep better knowing that A) the word “micturition” exists and B) what it means.
I really do love these kinds of stories. They fill me with hope. I love being reminded that in the midst of challenge and difficulty, we are still basically caring creatures. Here are these men and women training for what must be one of the most difficult jobs (being a soldier), in a harsh climate and still they find find the space to notice other species and there are resources to help.Â
Cheers,
Sharon
And, I love that you stopped in to appreciate this, Sharon! I saw your post roll in today and was all set to come by when something got in the way.
What’s more, I had no post for today. Upon reading this story, it called to me. Easy to write as it felt good reading it, too!
BTW, where is that guy Geoff Reiner these days? Have not seen hide nor hair since his The Happy Friday post. Is all well or did you guys part ways?
Soulati | B2B Social Media Marketing I love it when posts just seem to write themselves!
All is well here and yes, Geoff has gone off to have his own adventures. He finished up with us at the end of April. We saw him last week. He’s got a lot of photography projects on the go. I’m sure he’ll have a new web site up soon.
Things are evolving here at Jump-Point. We’re growing and evolving so we’re all a bit head’s down, going flat out. It is extremely exciting as we’ve been working to get here for quite some time!Â
Hope all is well with you too!